中考补全对话题答题技巧 补全对话解题技巧
1. 仔细审题。明确大意首先要仔细审题，即在对话不完整的情况下，尽量弄懂该篇对话的大意和情景。
2. 分析对话。试填答案在解题过程中，要根据具体语境和上下文，分析对话中所缺部分、判断所缺的句子。
3. 全文复读。融会贯通在试填好答案之后，应从头至尾再把对话读一遍，按照对话情境，中心内容，推理判断。
2019贵州安顺
Peter: Excuse me. sir? Could you tell me the wav to the nearest bank? Li Hua: 41 You can ask the lady over there Peter: Thank you all the same ( A moment later) Peter: Excuse me. 42
Wang Mei: No. there isn't a bank near here, but there
is one near the People's Hospital. Peter: 43
Wang Mei: It's about fifteen minutes' bus ride Peter: 44
Wang Mei: The No. 10 bus Peter: 45
Wang Mei: It is across from the bookstore Peter: Thank you very much. Wang Mei: You're welcome. A. Is there a bank near here? B. How far is it from here? C. Where is the nearest bank? D. Which bus can I take ? E. Sorry, I'm new here. F. By the way, where is the bus stop? G. That sounds great.
答案：EABDF
2019甘肃兰州
阅读下面的对话，根据上下文，从方框内选择恰当的选项补全对话，使对话完整、符合逻辑。(其中有两项为多余选项) 注：请将此题答案填涂在答题卡选择题部分的相应位置上。 W: Hi,Peter! You look terrible! What's the matter with you? M: __81__
W: Sorry to hear that. __82__
M: I cut myself by accident while I was making dinner. W: That sounds bad. __83__ M: Yes, it’s kind of serious. W: Have you seen a doctor? M: Yes. __84__
W: What did the doctor do with the cut? M: __85__
W: Oh! Don't touch water. And you will be better soon. M: OK.Thank you! W: You are welcome.
A: How long have you been like this? B: Is it serious? C: I cut my finger yesterday. D: What happened? E: He washed the cut, put some medicine on it and then put a bandage on it. F: Take these medicine three times a day. G: My wife drove me to the hospital. 【答案】CDBGE
2018贵州毕节
A：Hi，Tom! You look very happy today．
B：Oh，yes．Guess what？My best friend Ben is coming． A：Oh，really？ 61
B：Tomorrow．I can't wait to see him． A： 62 B：For two weeks． A： 63
B：He is really friendly．I'm sure you will like him when you see him． A：What does he look like？ B： 64 He plays football well． A：Could you introduce him to me？ B： 65
A．How long will he stay？ B．Of course． C．When is he coming？ D．What is it？ E．What is he like？ F．He is tall and strong． G．How often does he visit you？ 答案： 61 C 62 A 63 E 64 F 65 B 2018广西 柳州
Lingling： Good morning， Daming Daming：71.
Lingling： May I ask you a question？ Daming：72. Lingling： What's this in English？ Daming：73.
Lingling： How do you spell\"ruler\"？ Daming：74. Lingling： Thank you very much． Daming：75. A．R-U-L-E-R，ruler． B．Good morning，lingling． C．I'm 12． D．You're welcome． E． Yes， of course F． It's a ruler．
参考答案: 71 B 72 E 73 F 74 A 75 D
日常生活篇
2017 天津卷
根据对话内容，从方框内选择恰当的句子将对话补充完整。（选项中有两项是多余的） A: Hi, Jason. Would you like to come over to my home this weekend? B: 66 What are we going to do together?
A: We are going to play chess on Saturday morning and I am going to cook noodles for you. B: Are you joking? 67
A: Of course I can. I’ve learned cooking on TV. B: 68
A: For two days. My parents have been away on business so I cook by myself. B: When will they come back?
A: 69 During these days, I have to do a lot of things alone. B: I’m sure you will have a special experience. A: Yes. 70 I like trying new things. B: You bet! See you then. A: See you.
A. How long have you learned it? B. Sorry, I can’t. C. Yes, I’d like to. D. That’s the main thing. E. In a week. F. Can you cook noodles? G. That’s wrong. 参考答案C F A E D 2017 黄冈卷
根据对话内容，从方框内的选项中，选择5个恰当的句子完成对话，并将所选句子前的字母代号写在相应题号后。
(Li Mei meets her friend Xiao Ming on the way to school. Li Mei = L Xiao Ming = X)
L: Hello Xiao Ming! You look a little upset. 72 X: It’s just my mom. She always nags (唠叨) me. L: Really? 73
X: She nags me about almost everything. “Get up now... Everything must be in place... Don’t forget to... Don’t listen to music...” L: Well, all the mothers like saying these words to their kids. X: Also, I am interested in music, but she doesn’t like it. 74
L: Maybe you are right. But I should say she nags you because she loves you. X: 75 I’ll try to understand her.
L: That’s right! Making yourself understood is important. If your mom knows that everything is fine, she will never nag. X: OK! 76 Thank you. A. What’s up? B. I hope the thing works out! C. What does your mother nag you about? D. I agree with you. E. How is it going? F. We don’t have the same interest in many things. G.I don’t think so. 参考答案A C F D B
校园生活篇 2017 重庆卷
阅读下面对话，从方框内7个选项中选择5个恰当的句子完成此对话。 A: Hey, Tony. You look so excited. What’s up? B: 64 And we will be in the final (决赛). A: You mean the school soccer games?
B: Yes. It was quite hand for us to beat Class Two. A: Congratulations to you all!
B: 65 But now I am a little nervous.
A: Take it easy. You should be confident and believe in your team. B: But sometimes I feel that we don’t work well enough as a team. A: Teamwork is very important. 66 B: Sounds good. I’ll do it right away. A: 67 B: Next Tuesday.
A: 68 I will be free then and I can watch the game. B: See you then. Bye! A: See you!
A. By the way, when is the final? B. That would be nice! C. We have just won a game! D. Thanks.Cindy. E. What about next Tuesday? F. Maybe you can talk with your teammates about that. G. What should I do? 参考答案C D F A B
2017 江西卷
阅读下面对话，根据对话内容从方框中选择恰当的句子填人空白中，使对话通顺、合理，意思完整。 A: Hi, how are you?
B: Not very well, I think I have the flu. A: Oh no! You poor thing. 81
B: It might be, I suppose, but it doesn’t feel like it. I’ve had it for a few days now. I just feel rally weak and tired all the time. A: 82 Maybe you should go home and get some rest. B: Yes, you are right. A: 83
B: That’s true. Could you tell Mr. Smith I’m sick? A: 84
B: And could you give him my homework? A: Sure. B: Thanks.
A: No problem. 85
B: I’ll try my best. Thanks. Bye. A: Bye. See you. A. Yes,of course. B. It doesn’t matter. C. That sounds terrible. D. Are you sure it’s not just a cold? E. How long have you been like this? F. You take it easy and get well soon. G. No one will thank you if you stay and spread it. 参考答案D C G A F
建议与请求 2017 山西卷
请根据对话内容，从方框内所给的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余项。
(At break, Amy meets Ken in the hallway.)
Amy: Hi, Ken. Jane’s birthday is coming. Have you received her invitation?
Ken: Yes. 31
Amy: Me too. I’m just thinking about the gift. 32 Ken: Well, she likes writing. Why not get her pens and books? Amy: 33 I think she’ll be happy to get them.
Ken: Yeah. By the way, how will you buy the gift? Will you ask your parents for money?
Amy: 34 I’ve already saved my pocket money.
Ken: You’re right. I think we should learn to manage pocket money. I just spend it on the things I really need. Amy:That’s true. 35
Ken: What a kind girl! Learning to save and use money is important to us. A. Yes, please. B. Sounds good. C. Of course not. D. How about you? E. Can you come to my party? F. Have you got any good ideas? G. I also use it to help others in need. 参考答案D F B C G
2017 广西卷
根据对话内容，从下面方框中选出恰当的句子补全对话。 A: Helen, where did you go last night? B: I went to Wanda Cinema. A: 71
B: Quite good. It has the best service. 72
A: Yes, I’ve been there several times. Did you see the film Doctor Strange last night?
B: No, I didn’t. 73 A: Yes, I think so. You should watch it. B: 74
A: Sorry, I have watched it twice. Why not ask Jane? She hasn’t watched it. B: 75
A. Is it fantastic? B. That’s a good idea. C. What do you think of it? D. Have you ever been there? E. Would you like to watch it with me? 参考答案C D A E B
计划与安排 2017 哈尔滨卷
从A~G选项中选出能填人空白处的最佳选项补对话。(选项中有两项是多余的) A: Hello! May I speak to David, please? B: Hello! 51 Who’s that?
A: Peter speaking.What are you going to do this Saturday? B: I have no idea. 52 A: Yes. Shall we go to the zoo?
B: Good idea. 53 Among them, I like pandas best. A: So do I. I can’t wait to see the pandas. B: Is the zoo far from here? A: Not very far. 54 B: How can we get there? A: The No. 8 bus can take us there. B: 55
A: Let’s make it half past eight in the morning. B: All right. See you then at the school gate. A: See you.
A. Do you have any plans? B. We can see various kinds of animals there. C. Where shall we meet? D. It is about five kilometers away. E. When shall we meet? F. This is David speaking. G. What about going to the zoo? 参考答案F A B D E
2017 陕西卷
根据对话内容，将方框内符合对话情境的句子抄写在对话空白处，使对话恢复完整。选项有两项是多余的。
( Student A and student B meet at the school gate after school. )
A: Hi, Liangliang. I called you at 9 last night, but you didn’t pick up. What were you doing? B: 76 A: Why?
B: For our school sale next week.
A: Oh, I almost forgot about it. I’ve also got something to sell. B: 77
A: Well, 1 will sell some school things that I no longer use. B: 78
A: I’m not sure. Maybe I will buy a schoolbag. What’s your plan? B: 79 They need help.
A: That’s a good idea! I will do it, too. 80 B: Yes. I hope we can help more people. A. What will you sell? B. I was doing my homework. C. I will give the money to poor children. D. It’s always great to help others. E. Then what will you do with the money? F. Where will you sell them? G. I was collecting my old books and toys. 参考答案G A E C D
文化与节日 2017 吉林卷
从方框中选择正确选项。(方框中有一个选项与对话内容无关) Dave: Nice to meet you! I’m Dave from America.
He Wei: Nice to meet you, too! I’m He Wei, an exchange student from China. Dave: China? It’s a great country. 36
He Wei: Really? Well, next year, you can come to my house for the New Year. Dave: OK. 37 He Wei: Of course not. On the New Year’s Eve, we always make dumplings with family and some coins are put in the dumplings. 38 Dave: That’s cool. Anything else?
He Wei: On the New Year’s Day, we Chinese always visit relatives and give gifts to each other.
Dave: Oh, I like gifts. 39
He Wei: In China, you shouldn’t open the gift at once. You should wait and open it later.
Dave: Really? Its interesting. 40 He Wei: You’re welcome.
A.Thank you for telling me so much. B. When I get a gift, could I open it right now? C. Would you mind telling me some customs about the festival? D. I’m interested in Chinese festivals, especially the Chinese New Year. E. The person with coins is lucky. F. Do you like coins? 参考答案D C E B A
2017 安徽卷
根据对话内容，从方框内的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项，其中有两个为多余选项。
Li Lei: Hey, Bruce. I’m going home this weekend. Bruce: 66
Li Lei: To celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival. Bruce: 67
Li Lei: It is an important time for family. Bruce: 68
Li Lei: We’ll have dinner together, watch the moon and eat mooncakes. Bruce: Mooncakes? Are they delicious? Li Lei: Yes. 69 We can celebrate it together. Bruce: 70 Thank you! Li Lei: You are welcome. A. Well done! B. For what? C. That’s great. D. What kind of festival is it? E. I have never tasted them. F. How will you celebrate it? G. Would you like to go with me? 参考答案B D F G C
二、英语书面表达专项训练
2．安全对每个人都很重要。请根据以下信息内容提示，写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。
提示：1. 体育锻炼 2. 上下楼梯 3. 交朋结友 4. 食品卫生
要求： 1. 语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯； 2．短文可以适当发挥；但要包含以上要点。
3．词数：80—100词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.___________ _____________________________________________
【答案】Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.
In a word, it's important to remember these for us all. 【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文。结合要点提示，可知本文主要从三个方面进行叙述，注意围绕要点组织材料，适当发挥。根据材料内容确定主要句子的时态，及句式等重要内容。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
3．马上要初中毕业了，大家都是依依不舍的。班主任决定在下周举办一场“My Life At School” 主题 班会 , 邀请全班同学参加。请你根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。
美好的回忆 1.与同学融洽相处； 2.得到老师的帮助； 3.获得交换生机会； 4.参加志愿者活动。 不开心的事情 1.好朋友李华转学； 2.不擅长语文写作。 1. 升上理想的学校； 未来展望 2. 能结识更多朋友； 3. 请你补充(至少两点)
My Life At School
How time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school. 【答案】My Life At School
How time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember.
In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.
I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以My Life At School为题，写一篇发言稿。题目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具体内容，学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达需要使用正确时态，并注意谓语动词的正确形式。内容应主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回忆；然后是不开心的事情；最后展望自己未来的高中生活。表格中有非常具体的提示，但不能逐词翻译表格中的短语，应把他们变成自己的话，并用英语表达出来。写作时应注意：文章中应包括表格中的所有信息，不能遗漏要点；第三部分的内容中还需要自己发挥想象力进行补充，注意应合情合理，与上文很好地衔接。另外注意句式结构要符合英语的表达习惯，用完整的句子表达。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用适当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。 【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己的初中生活，并展望了未来。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是题目中给出的开头，作者使用一句话引出下文；第二段是主体，介绍了过去美好的回忆以及不开心的事情；最后一段对未来进行了展望。各部分内容安排合理，有层次、有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，注意了动词正确形式的变化。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。语言准确、得体，表达自然、流畅。短文中使用了丰富的句型和短语，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia.Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.等。
4．初中生活即将结束，学校英语俱乐部特邀你写一篇英语短文,给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。 内容要点如下：
1. 初中科目更多，好的学习方法很重要； 2. 锻炼身体，保持健康；
3. 参加社团活动，使学校生活丰富； 4. 多读书，多交朋友； 5. 补充一两点个人想法。 注意：
1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 2. 词数：60－80；
3. 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译； 4. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：method n. 方法 club n．社团 colorful adj.丰富的 Welcome to our school!
________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you. Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life. 【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，自己即将毕业，给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。结合所给的材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，以第一人称为主，要注意主谓一致，所写的句子要符合英语语法，用自己熟悉的单词和句式来写。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，开头两句很自然地过渡到正文上来。用了短语和句式，如：graduate from毕业于；share sth with sb和某人分享某事；wait for等候等，用来一些过渡词或短语，如：Firstly, Secondly,In other words, At last等，上下文衔接很自然。
5．书面表达
我校决定让学生轮流打扫厕所，以此作为教育学生的一种方式。 这件事在学生中引 起了强烈的反响，请你把下列不同意见整理成一篇书面材料，报告给学校。 同意 ：1．多数学生是独生子女，不会做事。 2．学生应该学会做艰苦的工作。 3．学会理解和尊重清洁工人的劳动。
不同意：1．很脏，容易使学生生病。 2．不是学生应该做的事情。 3．打扫教室就足够了。
注意：1．短文应包括表中所有内容，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译； 2．不少于80词。 生词提示：respect尊重
【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.
Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.
But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students＇jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough. 【解析】 【详解】
阅读题干要求，这是一篇看法类的作文，那么首先得点明讨论的话题，然后分别写出不同人群对此事的看法，时态以一般现在时为主。
重点词汇及短语：argument争论；take place发生；among（三者或三者以上）之间；a good chance for sb对某人来说是个好机会；help sb do sth帮助某人做某事；get sick生病。 亮点句型：
（1）A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自从我们学校让学生做自愿劳动以来，在学生中发生了一场激烈的争论。现在完成时（have/has+done）。
（2）To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做义务劳动是他们学习如何做困难工作的好机会。动词不定式作主语，谓语动词用单数，疑问词+to do。
6．扬州市“五个一百工程” 英语经典文学(English classics)阅读正在全市各地各校全面而深入地推进，这提高了扬州学子的人文科学素养，并促进了他们的终身发展。某校正在开展中学生是否有必要阅读英文经典文学的大讨论，请根据以下问题和要求用英语写一篇文章参与讨论。
1. Do you think reading English classics is necessary? Why? (Give 3 reasons)
2. How do you usually take part in the activity of reading English classics? (Give 3 examples, e.g. take part in the Reading Club, take notes while reading…… )
3. What’s your advice for the students who are weak in English? (Give 1-2 opinions) 要求 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括问题中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
With the development of the Five One-hundred Project in Yangzhou, our school has had a
discussion about whether it is necessary for middle school students to read English classics. 【答案】With the development of the Five One-hundred Project in Yangzhou, our school has had a discussion about whether it is necessary for middle school students to read English classics. I think reading English classics is not only necessary but also important. First, we can learn a lot about Western history and culture by reading. Second, by reading classics we can enlarge our vocabulary and improve our writing. Finally, it can help us with our lifelong learning. So I often
spend my free time reading English classics.
I am in the Reading Club. And I often take notes while reading. What’s more, I sometimes ask the teacher for help if I have difficulty reading books.
If some students are weak in English, they can read the short and easy English stories at the very beginning. Well begun is half done. Next, they should keep reading and never give up. Then their English will be improved little by little. 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇要求关于某校正在开展中学生是否有必要阅读英文经典文学的大讨论，请根据问题和要求用英语写一篇文章参与讨论。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
7．书面表达
根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。
每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱（lucky money）。随着生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信(WeChat)或支付宝(Alipay)收压岁钱。同学们该如何管理自己的钱，让自己的钱用得更有意义？请结合自己的实际写一篇文章，词数 80 词以上，文中不能出现真实校名和人名。内容包括如下： 1. 你的压岁钱的来源和用途；
2. 对合理使用压岁钱的建议（至少 3 点）；
3. 呼吁大家节约用钱，把自己的压岁钱用在最需要、最有意义的地方。
【答案】Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.
In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.
All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way. 【解析】 【详解】
每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱（luckymoney）。随着生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信(WeChat)或支付宝(Alipay)收压岁钱。同学们该如何管理自己的钱，让自己的钱用得更有意义？这是一篇给材料作文，本题所给材料比较详细，写作中注意将所给内容表达出来，不能逐字翻译。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，注意谓语动词的变化。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间
可以适当使用连接词。 【点睛】
文章使用了很好的短语和句子：In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games.这些给文章增色不少。
8．为配合学校“诚信教育”活动，学校英语报开展了以“Try to be honest”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下面的内容提示，写一篇征文稿。
（1）列举你班同学存在的不诚实现象：抄作业，考试作弊，说谎话......; （2）简述诚实的重要性，并用你的一次具体经历加以说明。 注意：（1）文中不得出现真实的人名和学校名称。 （2）词数100左右。
（3）短文首句仅供参考，不计入总数。 参考词汇：作弊cheat（v.）说谎tell a lie Try to be honest
To be honest is one of the most treasured traditional values in China.____________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Try to be honest
To be honest is one of the most treasured traditional values in China. The children are taught to be honest when they are very young. At schools the students are also instructed to be honest. However, with the development of society, we often hear complaints about dishonesty. Reports with the theme of dishonesty often appear in the media. For example, some people try to get rich and live a comfortable life. But they do not work hard honestly, instead they cheat others. They sell something quite ordinary at a very high price. Some people’s delaying paying back the loan can serve as another example. Some people, including some college students, get loan from the bank, and promise to pay within, say, 3 years. However, they don’t do that.
The dishonest people sometimes can get benefit from their behaviors. So some people assert that dishonesty can bring people benefit, while honesty only makes people suffer. Is that so? Definitely not. It is always true that honesty is the best policy. It pays to be honest. The cheater selling \"the treasure\" mentioned above will surely be disclosed and punished some day. On the contrary, if he had been honest, neither the buyer nor he himself would have suffered. The people who do not return money in time will sooner or later become infamous, and will not get the money from others again. If he had acted differently, he would have earned respect and trust, meanwhile, the bank would not have suffered from loss.
【解析】这是一篇诚信征文，英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。
9．“苔花如米小,也学牡丹开。”我们大多数人虽然微不足道,但也能有所作为。请以One thing I felt very proud of 为题用英语写以写一篇短文,描述你曾经做过得引以自豪一件事情。 要求:1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2.词数80左右。
【答案】One thing I felt very proud of
I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother. To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以One thing I felt very proud of为题，介绍自己曾经做过的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。作文是开放式的，题目中只给了主题，具体的写作内容，需要学生们自己发挥想象力去补充。审题可知，体裁是记叙文，记叙一件自己做过的事情，且是能让自己感到自豪的，故文章应使用一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。短文应由开头、主体和结尾三部分组成，开头引出话题；第二部分为中心，具体描述事情的过程；最后一部分简要描写一下自己的感受。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，应从句子的整体结构出发，使用较常见、易于把握的简单句结构，如主谓宾或主系表结构。为提升作文档次，穿插使用并列句或复合句，如宾语从句、状语从句等。或使用祈使句、非谓语动词、感叹句等特殊句式结构。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，以使文意连贯。 【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求描述了自己做过的一件引以为豪的事情。短文有如下几个特点：首先短文内容完整、充实，叙述具体，详细，作者描写了自己做饭给妈妈庆祝生日这件事，符合题目要求。文章分三段，第一段用一句话引出话题；第二段详细描写了事情的过程；最后一段写了自己的感受。结构清晰，安排合理。其次短文里使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时、第一人称叙述，注意了谓语动词过去式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式。语言得体，语法规范，句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了时间状语从句、并列句、非谓语动词等复杂句式结构。短文中较好的句型和短语有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。
因篇幅问题不能全部显示，请点此查看更多更全内容