初中英语作文写作技巧
一、 认真审题,确定时态人称,同时关注题材格式。
时态:故事性一般用过去时,其中表达感受时可用现在时
说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时,举例时可用过去时
根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用,如过去与现在的对比
人称:注意句中人称的统一
格式:注意书信格式的开头和结尾
二、 找全信息点,紧扣主题,突出重点。
切忌只看表格或所列1、2、3中信息点。要仔细读题,找全信息点,适当增加合理内容。
三、 成文时表述正确,文字流畅。
单词不会时,可找一个相近单词或词组来表达,幸运的话在卷中其他地方出现的单词可以拿来用。
切忌与汉语的一一对应,考虑句子结构、短语及单词的正确使用。
四、认真检查,看是否有单词拼写和短语运用是否正确,句子结构是否清晰。
常用连接词
表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly, Secondly, And then, Finally, In the end
表并列补充关系的:What’s more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, And, As well as
表转折对比关系的:But, Yet, However, On the contrary, Although+clause(从句),In spite of +n./doing,
表因果关系的: Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result, Since, Otherwise
表解释说明: For example句子, For instance句子, such as+n/doing, in this case
表达自己观点:As far as I know, In my opinion
表总结: In short, In a word, In conclusion, In summary, Finally, In general, In all, Generally speaking
表对比关系:On the one hand…On the other hand…, Some…while others…
表强调:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important
表目的:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to
会用两三个从句
宾语从句举例: I believe Tianjin will be more beautiful and prosperous.
状语从句举例: If everyone does something for the environment our hometown will become clean and beautiful.
动名词做主语举例: Reading books in the sun is bad for ours eyes.
It’s bad for our eyes to read books in the sun.
开篇
技巧一:主旨设问更给力
I think it’s important for us to do sports. Why? Because it’s good for our healthy and study.
I think it’s important for us to protect environment. Why? Because it’s good for living.
I think it’s important for us to learn English. Why? Because it’s the most-widely used language in the world.
技巧二:常用观点表达句
Different people have different opinions, and I prefer…
正文
1.表达观点要“自我”
In my opinion, we should…
2.两句之间要过渡
I left my pen at home. What’s more, the drugstore was closed that day.
3.问题阐述用形容词句型
普通级:The environment is bad.
比较级:The environment is getting much worse than before.
最高级:I have never seen the worse environment.
It was an unusual experience in my life.
→It was one of the most unusual experience in my life.
4.多用it句式…is a…way to…
Watching TV is a wonderful way to learn English.
5.增强情感转感叹
How important it is for students to do sports!
6.结合定从活用there be句型
Many reasons made me like reading.
→There are many reasons why I enjoys reading.
7.列举式结构:first of all, secondly, besides, what’s more, last but not leastone thing…for another
8.make更有feel
After doing sports, I feel relaxed.
→It makes me feel relaxed to do sports.
9.连接词不再用and
增补not only…but also…, as well as
, for
进阶what’s more, furthermore
10.喜欢不再like
be fond of, enjoy, be crazy about
11.提建议不要一直用should
suppose, had better, have no choice but, It’s our duty to…
结尾
1.各种号召
Don’t put it off.事不宜迟
2.“越”多多益善
The better we take care of the environment, the more beautiful the world will be.
3.名言警句
Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧
Rome was not built in one day.罗马不是一天建成的
Interest is the best teacher.兴趣是最好的老师
没有积累?实在不行自己编也OK
Once there was a great man said “……”
英语书信的常见写作模板开头部分
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
It’s glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.
I'm pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
I'm writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America
议论文写作
1.正反观点式议论文模板
导入:第1段
Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should…(导入话题)
Our opinions are divided on this topic. (观点有分歧)
正文:第2段
Most of the students are in favour of…(正方观点)
Here are the reasons.
First…Second…Finally…(列出2-3个赞成的理由)
正文:第3段
However, the others are strongly against it.(反方观点)
Their reasons are as follows.
In the first place… What’s more…In addition…(列出2~3个反对的理由)
结论:第4段
Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点)
2.“A或者B”类议论文模板
导入:第1段
Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways.
Others, however, argue that B is much better.
Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:第2段
There are many reasons why I prefer A.
The main reason is that... Another reason is that…(赞同A的原因)
正文:第3段
Of course, B also has advantages to some extent…(列出1-2个B的优势)
结论:第4段
But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that…(得出结论)
3.观点论述类议论文模板
导入:第1段
提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favor of the decision.(亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对)
The reasons for this may be listed as follows(过渡句,承上启下)
正文:第2段
First of all…Secondly…Besides…(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由)
结论:第3段
In conclusion, I believe that…(照应第1段,构成“总一分一总\"结构)
4.\"'How to\"类议论文模板
导入:第1段
提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:第2段
Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective.
First of all… Another way to solve the problem is ... Finaly…(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)
结论:第3段
These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to…(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)
写作范文
短语:
常用连接词: 记忆句子:
手机的利弊 Nowadays smartphones play an important role in our lives. A number of middle school students have owned them. No matter where we are, we can see students playing with their smartphones. Smartphones are really good for students. They make students keep in touch with their friends or family conveniently. And they help students get information more easily. However, everything has two sides. When students spend too much time on smartphones, they don't have time to communicate face to face with their friends or family. Smartphones may take their attention away from their studies. More
seriously, using smartphones too much may cause health problems. In my opinion, students should use smartphones wisely. And it's necessary for them to take part in more outdoor activities. 对中国的看法 With the rapid development of China's economy, more and more foreigners have a better understanding of our country. Three foreign friends are expressing their opinions on China. Bruce comes from America. He once studied in China. He thinks there are lots of beautiful schools in China and most students are smart. Carol is an English woman. She has visited China many times. She thinks China is a great country with lots of places of interest. What's more, people can taste all kinds of delicious food in China. As for David, he lives in Canada. He enjoys shopping in China. He thinks products made in China don't cost so much and are of very high qualities. And mobile payment in China is quick and convenient. My Favorite Teacher How time flies! Nearly three years of junior high school life is coming to an end. During these years I have met many teachers and Mr.Wang is my favorite teacher.
In fact, he's of medium build with glasses and looks common. However, he is funny and kind. He can teach math very well by making his classes interesting. I used to hate math because it was difficult and boring. But he was always patient enough to tell me how to learn math well. As a result, I showed more and more interest in math. Thanks to Mr.Wang, I could get good grades in all my math exams. And I wish to be a math teacher like him in the future. My Best Friend
毕业时刻即将到来,你校英文校刊向初三年级学生征文,题为 “My Best Friend”,以此作为对初中生活的纪念。请你写一篇征文,介绍你初中阶段的好友。内容包括他/她的学习情况、性格特点及爱好。(好友的名字用Mary或Jack代替。)
提示词语:hard-working, be good at, friendly, get on well with, dance, draw, win prizes
范文一:
Mary is my best friend. She is hard-working and interested in all the subjects we learn at school. She is really good at Chinese and English. Mary is very friendly. She is always ready to help others. So she gets on well with her classmates and friends. What’s more, she is outgoing. She enjoys taking part in all kinds of school activities. She enjoys dancing, and she also draws well. She often joins in
competitions and has won many prizes. I feel proud of her as her best friend.
After this summer vocation, we may go to different schools for further study, but I’ m sure that we’ll be good friends forever. 范文二:
Time goes by, I’ m leaving for high school. But I’ll never forget Mary, my best friend, who can read my thoughts easily.
She’s expert in study and has set a good example for me. And she’s so friendly that she gets on well with everyone in our class, including the teachers. That’s why the conversations with her always end up with laughter. What’s more, she’s keen on drawing and has won all kinds of prizes so far. We all feel proud of her.
All in all, friendship takes an important role in our life. I’m sure that the friendship between us will be kept in our hearts forever.
Plans For the Summer Holiday
The summer holiday is coming. I'm going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. I will read more books, because reading can not only make me clever, but also make me get more knowledge. What's more, I will try to spend more time chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am going to take
part in social activities so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I’d like to go to visit Shanghai. I'm sure I’ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.
My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.
When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time, I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step, I made great progress in English.
In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
How to learn English well
As we know, English has become an international language. It is more popular than any other language in China. English is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world. But how to learn it well? The best way is to use it all the time. If we can talk in English, think in English we can learn it well.
At school, we should learn to hear, speak, read and write carefully. We should spend enough time in practicing English. If we keep on working hard at English, we will be able to be good at it one day.
梦想 每个人都有属于自己的梦想,而梦想让我们对未来充满希望。你的梦想是什么?在毕业来临之际,你们班准备召开以“My Great Dream”为主题的英语班会。请结合以下提示,写一篇不少于80词的发言稿,谈谈你的梦想。(发言稿开头已经给出, 不计入总词数) 提示:1. What's your dream? 2. Why do you have such a dream? 3. How are you going to achieve your dream? 4. What else would you like to say about your dream? My Great Dream Everyone has a dream and so do I. As we all know, the computer and the Internet have become part of our life. And we depend heavily on the computer. So my dream is to be a computer engineer in the future. I'll teach people some safe ways to use the Internet. At the same time, I'll develop some apps to make people's life easier and better. Of course, being a good computer engineer is not easy, but
I will do whatever I can to achieve my dream. To achieve it, I need to study science, math and English well. All I have to do is to focus on my studies and never give up. I'm sure my dream will come true. 低碳生活
现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活”(low-carbon life),即:降低二氧化碳的排放,采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处,请你写篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括:你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。
Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think it’ s my duty to live a 1ow-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we'd better not spend much money on expensive clothes.
If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.
My Low-carbon Life
It's our duty to protect the environment. The environment is becoming worse
and worse, So we must do something to prevent people from polluting the environment. First, we should go to school on foot and tell our parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps, fans, TV sets and lights in time when we don’t need them. What’s more, water should be reused by us. Third, it is good to make full use of paper. We should use the both sides of the paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, remember to go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things.
Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.
My low-carbon life
Now the human living environment is becoming worse and worse. So a new lifestyle called low-carbon life is spreading to every part of our country. As middle school students, how can we have a low-carbon life?
Firstly, we can go to school on foot or by bike. Secondly, we shouldn’t waste water or electricity. Do remember to turn off the lights when we leave the room and turn off the tap in time after using it. Thirdly, we should use cloth bags in our daily life instead of plastic ones. Fourthly, we should also make full use of paper. We’d better recycle some of our textbooks.
It’s important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.
父亲节
父亲节马上就要到了,但是有些同学不知道送什么礼物给父亲。请根据下面的提示进行适当扩展,并向同学们提出一些建议。80词左右,开头和结尾以给出(不计入总词数)。
提示:1.如果有足够的零花钱,可以为父亲买一些使用单不贵的东西,如领带
2.还可以为父亲做些力所能及的事情(do something that you can do),如为父亲准备一杯茶等他下班后饮用等。
Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.
If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.
No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t you think so?
家乡的变化
最近,康敏的加拿大朋友Michael给他发来电子邮件,想了解康明家乡的变化。假如你是康敏,请根据以下提示,给Miachael回一封电子邮件。
过去 生活条件差,道路狭窄,车辆少,住不好,吃不饱,联系不便......
现在 生活条件优越,道路宽,车辆多,住得舒适,手机普及......
要求:1.围绕以上内容进行合理表述;
2.所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面;
3.词数80词左右,开头语以给出(不计入词数)。
参考词汇:living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications(通讯),telegram, thanks to, rapidly, mobile phone, policy
Dear Michael,
You want to know the changes about my hometown. You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago.
In the past, the living conditions were very poor. There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow. Usually, a big family was crowed into a small, dark house. Most families couldn’t get enough food. The communications were simple and slow. People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram.
Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recent years. The living conditions are much better and more comfortable. The roads are
wide. Some people have their own cars. Most of the people have lived in big new houses. Quite a few adults have mobile phones. Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better.
Sincerely
Kang Min
Great changes in my hometown
More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small, old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few factories. The people didn't have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life.
It has changed a lot in the past twenty years. The people have found a lot of ways of making money. Now there are many tall buildings. They are very beautiful. Roads are wide and clean. People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work. Many people have cell phones and personal computers. People’s living conditions have improved a lot.
Thanks to the government’s efforts, my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.
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