中考英语作文写作技巧总结
中考写作注意事项：
知识点1：
①记叙文之人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名，外貌，性格，爱好等多个方面，但是不能出 现真实的姓名，校名及家庭住址。
②考试时最好以学生身边普通的人物进行描写，从平凡的人中找到不平凡的精神。考试的时 候需要严格按照题目要求进行写作，包括所给的全部信息，既不能遗漏，也不能随意添加。
③议论文体裁特点：要求学生就某一方面的问题通过摆事实、讲道理的方式来发表自己的看 法。一般来说，议论文由论点、论据、论证三部分组成。 1）论点要正确无误。
2）论据要可靠充分。论据可以是人们公认的真理，也可以是经过实践考证的经典著作。 3）论证要合理严密。人们常用的论证方法有归纳法、推理法、对比法。 4）议论文一般按提出问题、解决问题的逻辑顺序来安排层次。
知识点2： 写作思路 1.认真审题，理清思路:
确定题目中的关键词，文章体裁和主旨。 2.搜集材料，制定提纲:
展开一次“Brain Storming”即头脑风暴，对该题引申出各种联想和论点。根据自己已有的经 验和词汇量选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的方面和论点来写作。
3.选择词句，动笔行文:
确定基本的写作时态，如记叙文通常用一般过去时
典型案例分析：
1. Write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信)
Suppose you are Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much about the result. What do you think? Try to offer her some advice. （假如你是Joe, 你的好朋友Betty 因为过于在意考试结果而感到焦虑。请给她写一封信，谈谈你的看法，并给她一些建议。） （注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） ．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．
第一步：分析题目
1. 审题
1) 这篇文章根据题目要求，我们可以确定文章的是一篇应用文即：书信。
2）根据写作要求知道是给他人提出建议或意见的文章，需要针对Betty遇到的问题实际出发来进行写作。
2. 确定写作重点和写作目的。
1）重点是安慰处于考试焦虑的Betty。 2）给出解决问题的建议。
3. 书信的格式：
英文信一般可以分为下列几个部分。
1）信端（Heading）即写信人的地址和发信日期。 2）收信人姓名地址
3）称呼 4）信的正文 5）结束语 6）签名
第二步：寻找素材：
1. 重点句型
1）It’s adj. for sb. to do 做…对某人来说… 2) … so … that … 如此… 以至于… 3) … too … to do 太… 而不能… … such … that … 如此… 以至于…
4) The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 … 的原因是… 5). That is why + 句子 那是…的原因 6). That is because + 句子 那是因为… 7). It is said that + 句子 据说… It is reported that + 句子 据报道… 8). There is no doubt that + 句子 毫无疑问…
9). It goes without saying that + 句子 不言而喻，毫无疑问 10). There is no need to do没必要做…
11). There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义 2. 提建议
had better (not) do 最好(不)做
how about / what about doing …怎么样? I think you should do 我认为你应该…
I suggest that you should do 我建议你做…
If I were you, I would do…我要是你的话，我会做… It’s best to do 最好做…
Why not do / why don’t you do…? 为什么不… 3. .努力做…
try to do努力做… strive to do 努力做…
try one’s best to do= do one’s best to do 竭尽全力做… make efforts to do = make every effort to do 尽力做… do what sb can (do ) to do 尽力做… spare no effort to do 不遗余力的做…
do what / everything sb. can to do 尽某人全力做…
4. 表示想/希望
want to do = would like to do 想做… hope to do 希望做… expect to do 期待着做… wish to do 希望做…
consider doing 考虑做…
第三步：写全文
范文一： Dear Betty,
I’m sorry to know that you are worried about a coming exam, for you care too much about the result. There’s no need to worry about it because you are always good at study. What’s more, it’s necessary for us to know how much knowledge we have mastered by taking an exam. I think you should do have a good rest instead of doing too much exercise because it may make you become more nervous. Besides, you can share your feelings with your classmates. It’s useful to share your bad emotion with others, which can help you feel better. I believe that you will try your best to overcome the upset emotion and do well in the exam. Yours, Joe.
精彩亮点分析：
亮点一：开门见山，直奔主题。
亮点二：经典句型：There’s no need to do/it’s necessary for sb. to do等。 亮点三：连接词自然：what’s more, besides。
亮点四：宾语从句，非限制性定语从句，状语从句使用恰当。 亮点五：短语使用精妙：do well in，instead of。
范文二： Dear Betty,
I’m glad that you’d like to share your feelings with me. In my opinion,there’s no point worrying about an exam too much. For one thing, taking exams is a common thing in a student’s life so that you’d better not cares too much about the result. For another, you are always have gifted for study. Here are some ways to help you deal with the upset feelings.First, you can listen to music which can make you have happy emotions. Second, you should pay attention to how to solve the problems instead of the score. I believe that you will try your best to overcome the upset emotion and do well in the exam. Yours, Joe
精彩亮点分析：
亮点一：连接词自然：In my opinion，For one thing，For another，First，Second。 亮点二：经典句型：there’s no point doing sth./try your best to do sth.。
亮点三：大量考纲短语：have gifted for，deal with，pay attention to，instead of ，do well in。 亮点四：宾语从句，定语从句，状语从句使用恰当。
学法提炼：
1.如何写人物类的文章：选择身边平凡的人，既可以体现真情实感，又比较贴近学生生活。
2.在写作前需要对文章题目进行仔细的分析及写完后要进行认真的检查。 3.在写作时要注意文章的人称和时态。
作文优化技巧：
改进文章内容：
Mother does all that she can for us.
1. She takes good care of my daily life. （1）She cooks meals for me. （2）She takes me to hospital. 2. Besides, she supports me in my study. （1）She invites me to libraries. （2）She helps me with my Maths. 3. What’s more, she always encourages me. （1）She tells me not to give up. （2）She suggests I have another try.
第一次 改进句子结构
1.She takes good care of my daily life.
（1）She cooks delicious meals for me with love . （2）She takes me to hospital when I get sick. 2.Besides, she supports me in my study.
（1）She invites me to libraries so that we can enjoy reading together. （2）No matter how busy she is, She helps me with my Maths.
3.What’s more, she always encourages me.
（1）She tells me not to give up when I have difficulties. （2）If I want to give up half way, she suggests I have another try.
第二次 改进句子结构
1.My mother is a responsible nanny/ mother.
（1） She cooks delicious meals for me with love.
（2） When I get sick, she takes me to hospital as soon as possible. 2.Besides, my mother is a close friend.
（1） She invites me to libraries so that we can enjoy reading together. （2） No matter how busy she is, She helps me with my Math. 3.What is more, my mother is a wise teacher.
（1）She tells me not to give up when I have difficulties. （2）If I want to give up half way, she suggests I have another try.
练习（presentation）（35-40mins）
I. Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic \"Let's learn to smile.\" (以“让我们学会微笑”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Suggested points:
■ Do you often smile in your daily life?
■ Why should we learn to smile? (Give one or two examples.) ■ What changes will we see if we smile more often?
Let's learn to smile.
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范文一：
Let's learn to smile.
In our life, there may be something unpleasant. For example, you fail in an exam; or you are misunderstood by your friends. These things may make you feel bad. Let’s learn to smile. Smiling to yourself can bring back your confidence and beat the unhappy feelings. Sometimes, the greatest enemy is yourself. Most important of all, smiling benefits your health. We should also learn to smile to others, and it will help us to get closer to other people. Therefore, smile is the most widelyunderstood language. Let’s learn to smile, I believe our world will be more wonderful and our life will be happier and happier.
范文二：
Let's learn to smile.
Life is just like a mirror. It will smile back to me if I face it with a smile, so I usually face life with a smile. As we all know, life is filled with sadness and frustrations when it brings us happiness and success. It is easy for us to smile when life is happy and successful, but we should face life with smile when it is sad and hard as well especially. I smile when I face the sadness because smile can give me hope, and the sadness will disappear gradually; I will be able to do everything much more effectively and all will be better. No matter what happens, face life with a smile!As long as you keep smiling and positive, life will be better and better .d,
批注：学生在写作中容易忽略最后一个问题，在写作前要要求学生做好审题的工作。学习词汇benefit，get closer to，frustration，effectively，No matter what happens，with a smile，As long as，positive的用法。
II. Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic \"An Unforgettable Match\" (以“一段难忘的比赛”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Try to improve the passage.（修改以下文章）
An Unforgettable Match
I have something unforgettable. It is a football match.It happened two years ago. I had a football match with my friends. I liked playing football very much. My friends liked it, too. In the match, I ran very fast. I was hurt. I could hardly stand up. I felt very sad. Tom stopped to look after me. He didn’t play football. We lost the game. We enjoyed ourselves.Friendship is very important. I will never forget it.
An Unforgettable Match
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范文：
An Unforgettable Match
I still remember an unforgettable football match which happened two years ago. During the football match, I ran very fast. I was not careful enough to fall down on the ground. My left foot was hurt so seriously that I could hardly stand up. I felt very sad. My friend Tom stopped to look after me instead of playing football. Though we lost the game, we still enjoyed ourselves. How unforgettable the football match is!
批注：通过连词讲句子改写成从句，并利用相关的短语给文章增添色彩。
III. Write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信)
假如你是Linda，你收到英国笔友Mark的来信，他现在住在北京姑妈家，春节期间他收到一些长辈给的压岁钱，请写一封回信，对有关“如何使用压岁钱”提一些建议。）
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范文一： DearMark,
I’m glad to hear from you. As is widely believed students receive their red pocket money during
Chinese New Year. So using pocket money properly is a must. I’d like to tell you the way I use my pocket money. First, I always consider what I really need. I will use the money to buy something necessary, such as pens and phone cards. Second, I will donate some money for poor students in the countryside, because I think showing my kindness to others will also improve myself. Finally, I deposit some money in the bank for more interests so that I can pay for my college expenses. All in all, I think it’s important for us students to manage our pocket money properly.
Yours , Linda 范文二： DearMark,
I’m happy to receive a letter from you.In order to make ourselves become independent and teaches us how to manage it. I’d like to give you some suggestions. First, I think you should make a list of items before going shopping so that you won’t buy anything unnecessary. Second, you should put the rest of the money into your piggy bank and never get it out until you need to buy something important.As the saying goes, “A penny saved is a penny earned.” By doing so, you will be able to become a good bank manager rather than a bankrupt. Yours , Linda
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