The chart describes the value in dollars of three companies, Greenacres Ltd, Carson Ltd and Farm Implement Ltd, selling farm equipment every five years from 1960 until 2000 and predicts their value up to 2012
As can be seen from the graph, the value of Greenacres Ltd selling material fluctuated over 52 years. (中心句)More specifically, although Greenacres Ltd, which almost has the largest amount of value over the whole period, rose from 2 million dollars to just over 4 million dollars between 1960 and 1990. Then, the value sharply dropped back to its original level in 2000. Value of selling products in the following years, as Greenacres Ltd is projected a stable ascend from above 2500 dollars to almost 4000 dollars during 2007 to 2012.
According to the bar chart, unlike Greenacres Ltd, the value of Carson Ltd experienced a gentle increased with slight fluctuation. In more detail, Carson Ltd, Its value increased from 500000 dollars in 1960 to around 1.5 million dollars in the predicted year 2012.
The third company, Farm Implement Ltd, was not set up until 1980. However, from this year onwards, the values started at only 100 million dollars in 1985. After that, its forecast value stood at approximately 3 million dollars in 2012.
In summary, the pattern in value of the three companies is upwards on the whole, although Greenacres Ltd has larger range of fluctuation than Carson Ltd and Farm Implement Ltd continues mounting up in value.
The chart below describes the value in dollars of three companies, Greenacres Ltd, Carson Ltd and Farm Implement Ltd, selling farm equipment every five years from 1960 until 2000 and predicts their value up to 2012
As can be seen from the graph, although Greenacres Ltd, which almost has the largest amount of value over the whole period, rose from 2 million dollars to just over 4 million dollars between 1960 and the year 1990, the value sharply dropped back to its original level in 2000 after that. However this company will control the decrease and start increasing in value to its original peak point of 4 million dollars in 2012. Compared with Greenacres Ltd, the trend for Carson Ltd, which almost has the smallest amount of value, is steadily upwards with some slight fluctuation during the whole period. Its value will increase from 500000 dollars in 1960 to around 1.5 million dollars in the predicted year 2012.
The third company, Farm Implement Ltd, was not set up until 1980. However, by the year 2000, its value stood at approximately 3 million dollars, tripling from its 1980 value of 1 million. Thereafter this company will basically maintain this developing trend only with more smooth increase.
In summary, the pattern in value of the three companies is upwards on the whole, although Greenacres Ltd has larger range of fluctuation than Carson Ltd and Farm Implement Ltd continues mounting up in value.
1． The bar chart shows the value in dollars of three companies selling farming equipment every five years from 1960 to 2012 until 2000 and their projected value up to 2000. 主体段：
Between 1960 and 2000, the value of Greenacres Ltd rose from 2 million to just over 4 million in 1990, and then dropped sharply back to about 2 million in 2000. In contrast, the pattern in Farm Implement Ltd was dramatically upward since it started trading in 1980 , and its value firstly went ahead of Greenacres Ltd in 2000. Besides, in the span of approximately 40 years, Carson Ltd’s level increased steadily from around 0.5 million to nearly 1.5million with some minor fluctuations.
Therefore Turning to the project value of the three companies, Farm Implement Ltd and Carsons Ltd maintain their original developing trend and go up to 3.5 million and 1.5 million respectively in 2012. Meanwhile the Greenacres Ltd also controls its decrease and begins rising since 2007. By 2010, its value is over the Farm Implement Ltd’s and become the highest one in these companies.
Comment: 主题段落应该写3段， greenacres ltd 一段， Farm implements ltd 一段， carsons ltd 一段。 再加上开头和结尾， 所以一共是5段.
编号1段： 开头段落只需要1-2句话就可以， 简单的说就是COPY， 但是需要做一些同义词的转换， 不要出现和原文一样的词语， 我帮你做了修改
主体段
第一段：比如要写G ltd 的话， 要有一个主题句： according to the ling grahp, there was not a stable fluctuation in G ltd. 接下来在具体写DATA。 第2段和第3段一样的写法
结尾段有点太长，把每一个的特点写出来就可以了
你在该一次给我看~！不懂的在问我~！
The chart below describes the value in dollars of three companies, Greenacres Ltd, Carson Ltd and Farm Implement Ltd, selling farm equipment every five years from 1960 until 2000 and predicts their value up to 2012
As can be seen from the graph, although Greenacres Ltd, which almost has the largest amount of value over the whole period, rose from 2 million dollars to just over 4 million dollars between 1960 and the year 1990, the value sharply dropped back to its original level in 2000 after that. However this company will control the decrease and start increasing in value to its original peak point of 4 million dollars in 2012.
Compared with Greenacres Ltd, the trend for Carson Ltd, which almost has the smallest amount of value, is steadily upwards with some slight fluctuation during the whole period. Its value will increase from 500000 dollars in 1960 to around 1.5 million dollars in the predicted year 2012.
The third company, Farm Implement Ltd, was not set up until 1980. However, by the year 2000, its value stood at approximately 3 million dollars, tripling from its 1980 value of 1 million. Thereafter this company will basically maintain this developing trend only with more smooth increase.
In summary, the pattern in value of the three companies is upwards on the whole, although Greenacres Ltd has larger range of fluctuation than Carson Ltd and Farm Implement Ltd continues mounting up in value.
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