With the increase standard of living，more and more people are having pleasure in shopping. Most of them like to shop online as it is said to be cheaper and more convenient. However, to be frank,( the phrase could be taken out) I think the advantages of shopping in a supermarket far outweigh of shopping online.
Admittedly, shopping online can bring great convenience. You don’t have to spend time in traffic. Besides, you don’t need to wait in a long line, nor carry heavy stuff. But, in this way, you may have a chance to go shopping with your family on weekend while it is replaced by online shopping(???). Think it carefully, isn’t it a good way to have family reunions thus strengthen your relationships? What’s more, shopping in a supermarket is a kind of exercise for those office workers who find it’s hard to make time available to do sports. In a word, it’s best of both worlds.
It’s true that sometimes the prize is lower by shopping online than in a supermarket. But, as a result, we have no idea about the quality. On the contrary, if we shop in a supermarket we will get a good knowledge of the quality of the goods especially when it comes to clothes, shoes and digital products. Moreover,the superiority of shopping
in a supermarket lies on the instant gratification of having product immediately. If you need something in a hurry, shopping online is not a good method(the word may not proper here).
To buy some goods is to meet your needs therefore quality is of essence. Just as an old saying goes: seeing is believing. For this reason, I prefer shopping in a supermarket. 评价：
文章流畅而且很细腻，有很多shopping in a supermarket的细节优点，短语丰富多样，但有些词组我觉得应该修改一下。
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